I did not work any more on the story after I posted about it last night, instead realizing that my profound exhaustion was a sign I should, perhaps, get some sleep. And thanks to the magic of turning the clocks back, my 11 hours of sleep magically turned into 10. XD
Now I must soon face the rest of the story. ponders whether replacing [[[And then this happens here]]] with "And then they had hat wild monkey sex", whether that's what's supposed to happen or not, will please my recipient.
ETA: I am totally leaving that typo in.
Now I must soon face the rest of the story. ponders whether replacing [[[And then this happens here]]] with "And then they had hat wild monkey sex", whether that's what's supposed to happen or not, will please my recipient.
ETA: I am totally leaving that typo in.