More ads!

[telophase]

Okay, try 2 and try 3 of the ConDFW ads. Whaddaya think? (I've got to get this in by today, anyway, so I can't spend much more time redoing it. XD)








The ad's in the FenCon program book at 8x5" 300PPI so the smaller text, which is 12 point font, will look just fine on the page.

Important bits: dates, guests of honor, new hotel (named similarly to the previous hotel). I didn't mention in yesterday's post that the ADDITIONAL complication for this particular ad is that we're going to be held in the same hotel as FenCon is being held in, and this ad is running in the FenCon program book. :D

ETA: Aaaand a new version, which I think I'll be going with unless I get a better idea in the next hour or two. (I did print it out and check the QR code to make sure it worked at that size and resolution!)

Comments

[green_knight]

The top one is better balanced. I like, from a distance, the second better - the figure is more grounded.

However, the first made me read on- I wanted to know what the page was about. The second is 'oh, another con' and then you look away.

[telophase]

Thanks! I ended up adding a grey bar behind the con name and date such that the space girl was standing on it:



I think I'll go with that one, unless I get a better idea in the next hour or two.

[kiro]

Oo, I like this one :)

[telophase]

Thanks!

[estara.livejournal.com]

I like the info font for the mass of details best in your last version, but I liked the name and number of the con on top in the second of these three version better. If you need to chose between one of the three, I think your third and last is the overall winner.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I went with the con name at the bottom, as someone on DW said that way made her intrigued enough to read more in the ad, while at the top she just went "Oh, another con ad". And as we need people to read to find out the news about the hotel...well, I went with that.

We'll see if it works or not! :D