Carrot onna Stick v. 2.0

[telophase]

I haven't gotten started coloring the Gojyo picture yet, but I did make a few small adjustments in areas that were sticking out. See if you can spot what I did. ;)





The original version, in case you forgot.

Comments

Re: A-ha!

[kate_nepveu]

Ah, caught the finger (and the collar) but not the eyes. I look forward to seeing him in color.

And actually that's a page from the scanlation, but whatever.

Re: A-ha!

[telophase.livejournal.com]

I am hoping to start coloring him tonight.

And the collar is actually his collar *bone*, but I can see where it looks like a collar to everyone, because of the lack of other clues. I think in color it should be more clear that he's not wearing a shirt.

Now I just have to find a clear version of the kanji on his headband...

Re: A-ha!

[telophase.livejournal.com]

*Ah - the collarbone's at too high of an angle... needs to be a little bit lower at the outer end because his shoulders are much wider than that...

Re: A-ha!

[kate_nepveu]

Clearest I got out of vol. 5 is : http://www.steelypips.org/miscellany/saiyuki/5-29-175-cropped.jpg

Re: A-ha!

[telophase.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :D