telophase: (Koumyou - hee)
telophase ([personal profile] telophase) wrote2008-07-27 10:52 pm

Adventures in punctuation!

Oh, how the lack of a comma can put a whole new spin on a sentence...
It starts in the dark, with a beefy yet intelligent man. The antagonist is a savior and motivated because they've always wanted to be a hero, and the plot involves elements like the mythic or archetypal coming alive and dating.

[identity profile] sleary.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
HA. "He's the kitchen boy on a journey to become king. She's the reformed killer seeking redemption. They go on a date!"

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
"Who will this lovely young princess disguised as a goosegirl choose? Bachelor Number One, a third son out to make his fortune with a talking cat, or Bachelor Number Two, an ambitious Dark Lord seeking world domination?"

[identity profile] meganbmoore.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 04:10 am (UTC)(link)
Awesomesauce.

Some of these really need to be written.

[identity profile] movingfinger.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 05:53 am (UTC)(link)
I've gotten some astonishingly coherent ones. E.g.:

The protagonist of this story is an orphan who has traumatic mutism. On the way to the story's conclusion the protagonist encounters a bitter person. This person has a self-destructive addiction. Plot elements include wordplay and the breaking of someone's reserved exterior, and at least one character is motivated because their country is not yet free.


It begins with a concubine in a lost civilization. This person meets a madam with a heart of gold and together they encounter one true love and bringing down an empire. The story winds up in a Parisian cafe and features lashes fluttering. The overall narrative concerns not fitting in.


This story is about what happens when an unintentional monster, who is motivated to atone for past misdeeds, and an overeager person, who is motivated to get attention, meet in an all-male or all-female environment. A key element of the conflict is a kiss on the neck from behind.


"So a raffish sidekick and a gentlewoman scholar walk into a bar..." (= 100,000 words from Mary Gentle.)


The story begins in a gentlemen's club staffed by automatons, when a black sheep and a siren meet because of marriage vows. It shows the journey is more important than the destination. The protagonist is not motivated by jealousy. (= 60,000 words from Georgette Heyer.)


The villain of this piece is a little princess, while the hero is someone who doesn't need anyone or anything (until they do). The plot begins with pampering in a sepulchre. The ending includes elements of teleportation and secret tunnels.

Mythdating

[identity profile] amberley.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 08:11 am (UTC)(link)
"the mythic or archetypal coming alive and dating" sounds like Nobilis (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nobilis). Fun!

chomiji: Cartoon of chomiji in the style of the Powerpuff Girls (Default)

[personal profile] chomiji 2008-07-28 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)


The text starts as an irritable detective encounters a train robbery while in an attic ... .



XD


[identity profile] movingfinger.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, a model railway fanatic!
chomiji: The four main characters fro the manga Saiyuki, with the caption On the road again (saiyuki - road)

[personal profile] chomiji 2008-07-28 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)


A team of adventurers consisting of an officer in Her Majesty's armed service, an underdog, an eccentric recluse, a cynical religious practitioner with a secretly soft heart, and a polite, good-mannered man brought to his breaking point discover trading insults and an aethernaut in Shangri-La.



This is getting pretty damn close to Steampunk Saiyuki ... .


ext_99067: (Kio -bwah-)

Re: (and elsewhere online in steam-punkerie ... )

[identity profile] lady-noremon.livejournal.com 2008-07-29 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I want to see this now :3
chomiji: A chibi drawing of Akari from Samurai Deeper Kyo, holding a plate of mochi dumplings, with caption Coming Right Up! (Akari-mochi)

(and elsewhere online in steam-punkerie ... )

[personal profile] chomiji 2008-07-28 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)


Article on people crafting steam punk PCs and other lovely artifacts, right here.


Re: (and elsewhere online in steam-punkerie ... )

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2008-07-28 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Cool, thanks! :D
ext_12512: Hinoe from Natsume Yuujinchou, elegant and smirky (STS Suki come-hither)

Re: (and elsewhere online in steam-punkerie ... )

[identity profile] smillaraaq.livejournal.com 2008-07-29 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooooooh! *grabby-hand WANT! motions at screen*

(My bookmark commission from LLNM just got back to me and she wanted a steampunky piece -- and while I've admired that aesthetic for quite a while, this is my first time actively trying to design within it. It's an absolute blast poking through laboratory-supply and woodworking catalogues looking for strange metal bits to combine in unexpected ways.)

Re: (and elsewhere online in steam-punkerie ... )

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2008-07-29 03:47 am (UTC)(link)
I occasionally while away way too much time on Etsy by searching for "steampunk" and admiring all the various bits of jewelry that pop up.

more words

[identity profile] movingfinger.livejournal.com 2008-07-29 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
a clockwork dancing bear

an old woman who longs to travel

an invisible man

a week-end aerial motorist

a despotic governor

a bowdlerizing lexicographer with a pince-nez

a constructed courtesan

a rookery of thieves

a Venetian-glass nephew

an ambassador from a lost civilzation

a diligent engineering student

an evil absent-minded professor

a clockwork acrobat with a broken drive chain

a beautiful woman rocketeer

a high-spirited tourist and her inscrutable chauffeur

a model railway fanatic

a curate whose hobby is chemistry

a blind gemstone-cutter

three little maids from school

an automaton repairman

a traveler with a heavy carpet-bag

a rude mechanical waiter

a frustrated brain in a jar

a temporary assistant who just wants a paycheck

an aviatrix with a downed aeroplane

an escaped laboratory rat who quotes Hegel

an itinerant clock-mender

a quixotic American newspaper editor

the French Foreign Legion

Her Majesty's Postal Service

the Brotherhood of Stage Illusionists

a league of red-headed men

an army of suffragettes

the Sultan's upholsterer

a merchant submariner looking for a ship

a captain of industry who revels in corrupted innocence

a photogrpaher who's always in the wrong place at the wrong time

magnifying eyeglasses

a complex, but utterly ruined, brass machine

a box of compasses, all pointing East

a green ray

an astrolabe

a liquor organ

a stereoscope

a telescope which shows things before they happen

a hand-cranked videograph

an automatic wine dispenser

a mechanical bull

a narghile

a Turkish chiboque which causes strange dreams

a pressure regulator

India-rubber boots

a cypher inscribed on Prince Rupert's drops

a remote-controlled sea serpent

a dangerous fondness for pyrotechnics

bets placed on a dirigible race

a gasogene

a coat which always has something useful in its pockets

a rigged roulette wheel

a gem-studded space-warping orrery

intelligence-enhancing crystals

a transformation-inducing drug

a glass harmonica

a deerstalker hat

an abandoned handcart full of broken equipment

an automated writing-desk

a grappling gun

tentalced statues carved from ice

the Giant White Rat of Sumatra

a peculiarly customized Model A

a Stanley Steamer with surprising capabilities

a steam yacht

a sand yacht

the howdah of an elephant with gilded armor

black ornithopters

a high-stakes game of rounders with cannonballs

spontaneous generation

monumental pastry

forcible abduction [is this already in?]

a potentially profitable proposition

mechanical difficulties

wisecracking

vacillation between good and evil

science in the service of art

the secret of turning lead into gold

art in the service of science

knowledge for its own sake

megalomania, but on a very small scale

a speaking waxwork which lies

an invasion of clockwork mice

a revivified mastodon

a menacing giant octopus in the Thames River

self-powered stilts

a windmill-powered Van de Graaf generator

a high-pressure boiler explosion which opens a portal into another dimension

a rope ladder dangling from a Zeppelin

a glass-domed city of slender towers on Venus

an around-the-world race

a mysterious island [is this already in there?]

the bottom of an asteroid-impact crater

a factory for producing automata

a balloon works

a maelstrom at the South Pole

a tea auction where not all is as it seems

Re: more words

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2008-07-29 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Added, phew! Thanks!