Beta needed...

[telophase]

I need one (1) person to beta my PBR chapbook story that (a) has read Project Blue Rose, (b) isn't rachelmanija* and (c) can do it tonight. :) Got one!





* We both have talked over backstory, setting, and future developments enough that I need someone who doesn't know any of that to read it and see if it makes any sense.

Comments

[oyceter]

Sure, shoot it over!

Ha, at this rate, my fingers will have been all over every story in the chapbook...

[telophase.livejournal.com]

OK, thanks! :D

(That makes it a group effort! XD)

ETA: Invite sent! let me know if it doesn't get to you.

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

Thanks! And thanks for reading mine AGAIN, and so fast, too. I hope the amount of effort I've put into it is reflected in the results, because I was up till 4:00 AM last night, after being up till 3:00 AM the night before, working on it. That is literally a first for me. (Working till 4:00 AM, I mean. I think I've done 3:00 before. Definitely 2:00.)

Are you beta-ing seajules's too?

[telophase.livejournal.com]

You know that means that if this thing tanks to the point of people setting their copies of it on fire and mailing us the ashes, we can blame oyceter for it?

XD

[oyceter]

Are you beta-ing [info]seajules's too?

Not yet, though I would be completely amused if I do! Also, your story is made of win, seriously! It makes me want to get out my glittery gel pen and draw hearts over Rivas and Jordan.

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

Sadly, if that happens I think we both know which story will be to blame.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

Noooo, yours will get posted above the beds of many a fangirl. XD *Mine*, they'll be all "WTF Nick? I signed up for more hot Rivas/Jordan action!"

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

Oh good! I'm a little nervous about it for [spoilery] obvious reasons, plus some less-obvious ones (written under an altered state of mind; not terribly happy with my prose writing in general at the moment) so that's good to hear.

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

I'm sure Nick has fangirls! Someone must be into sad, shy, wispy straight boys.

Just wait, some day some blushing girl will come up and say, "Um... Can you draw Nick? Er... with his shirt off? Bent over the diner counter?

[telophase.livejournal.com]

We'll know we've arrived the day there's a shipping war over PBR. XD (Not to mention the silly smooshed-name thing for the pairings!)

[oyceter]

I like your prose a lot! I actually did the writer's admiration post on springgreen precisely because I had just been whining to Yoon a few days ago on how everyone did prose/character/plot/imagery better than me, and then figured that it might be nice to let those people know I was jealous of them in a good way.

[oyceter]

I know! Mine is all "Here! Have sad psychic kids with no romance at all!"

Hey, do you know who is beta-ing seajules'? I am sort of tempted to do so now, just to make it five for five.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

Dunno who. You can always volunteer. XD

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

Noooooooo, now you have put horrible portmanteaus in my head! I will not even type them out, they are so horrible.

I am still torn between the worst ever being the vomitous nature of Love (Logan/Veronica) or the unnecessary need to abbreviate Jim/Pam into Jam.

Though it cracks me up that the portmanteaus for Mohinder/Sylar on Heroes are Mylar and Cylinder.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

I traumatized myrialux with "Zutara" and "Kataang," even though they're not particularly horrible as ship names go.

I was traumatized by something in the past year, but I seem to have blocked the memory in an attempt to rescue my sanity.

[oyceter]

Done! Let me know if you have questions or want to brainstorm or anything.

[yhlee.livejournal.com]

I like Nick...

[telophase.livejournal.com]

OK, thanks! :) I'll probably read through it tonight, then work on it tomorrow after it's had a chance to sit in my brain for a while.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

Well, then we know at least one person will like my story! XD

[yhlee.livejournal.com]

*\o/*

[yhlee.livejournal.com]

Hey, at least you didn't set out to write a sex scene and end up fading to black! I feel that I have let the project down. :-D

[telophase.livejournal.com]

XD At least it helps keep it to an R instead of an NC-17!

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

Er. There are cocks in mine.

I'd still call it an R, though.