A but more editing

[telophase]

A bit more editing on the character generator (previously posted under lock: the survey I have on my generator site shows that people really want a character generator).

Comments/suggestions welcome.

https://www.magatsu.net/generators/character/

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[movingfinger]

I feel like there's too much detail, so it goes off the rails very easily:

This person used to be a music therapist, but resigned to go back to school to become a glass installer. They are usually treacherous and valiant, but never brittle.

Their tightly curled hair complements unseeing eyes set in a presentable face, atop a narrow body.

Once they were convinced that fairness was essential, but now they are not so sure, having been shaken by betrayal for love. After that occurrence, they started being resilient.

Parts of that make sense....