Panel one of page 10 of the dj

[telophase]

Renji: smokin' hot.

Rukia: not so much.

(yeah, her scale's a little bit off and she needs to be sliiiightly bigger. And Renji's neck is a bit too long, but I can fix all that easily. XD)





rachelmanija: the rest of the page is why I never send you my roughs, because you would email me back with "WHAT the HELL is GOING ON?!" It's basically a quick visual reminder to myself of the panel angle, the pose, and the composition.

Comments

[meganbmoore.livejournal.com]

I think I spot glomping in the roughs.

*has a bizarre need to add shoujo sparkles to the first panel*

[telophase.livejournal.com]

There mmmmmmmight be some glompage, yes...

[meganbmoore.livejournal.com]

I just assume the heavy lined circled are heads and the thick lines in the ight places are arms, and the imagination goes to town.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

I have to admit when I first opened this page tonight, I looked at panel 3 and went "...what?" But then I spotted Rukia's butt and it all fell into place from there.

Panel 2 is going to look different from originally intended, though. I had a Better Idea.

[meganbmoore.livejournal.com]

Panel 2 currently looks like *POUNCE!* Panel 3 you can't tell, but from panel 1 and the 4th panel, you can guess fairly well.

[telophase.livejournal.com]

Panel 2 is not *POUNCE* at all, actually. :) Panel 3 is.

[frostedelves.livejournal.com]

Ooo. Hawt. :D

[0nolicious.livejournal.com]

Renji with his hair down = I'M SOLD ON IT ALREADY.

[rachelmanija.livejournal.com]

Panel 1: Gorgeous!

Panels 3-4: Fascinatingly abstract!

[chomiji]

Wow, you really do have an affinity for Renji in his hotness, don't you?

:-D

[telophase.livejournal.com]

It's aaaaaall in the intensity of the expression, which is all in the eyes and the mouth. XD