4.1 - Follow-up on Blade of the Immortal

[telophase]

OK, I couldn't stand it any longer. I went into Photoshop and rearranged the panels on the second BLADE OF THE IMMORTAL example to see what I THINK (emphasis on that THINK!) the original panels looked like. [ edit ] There's confirmation in the comments that I got them right. I r so smrt!



First, the panels the way I think they looked like in Japan. Read from the far right over to the far left.




And now ... hey, there's a very definite path of action! You lose that nifty effect where the arrows lined up on both pages, but in return you get a very clear flow of action throughout the page:



Sweet!






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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

perhaps i should've said "eruditer than me"? :)

[telophase.livejournal.com]

XD Couldn't quite tell what your tone of "voice" was there. :)

I once gave my dad a button that said "I AM ERUDITER THAN YOU" and he argued, in all sincerity, that it should be "I AM MORE ERUDITE THAN YOU" thus proving once more how the subtle implications of jokes often zipped right over his head.