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telophase ([personal profile] telophase) wrote2007-11-20 11:24 am
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Okay, BORED NOW

Wonder how an LJ round-robin story would work? Let's see: if I post the beginning of a story here, anyone who felt the urge to continue it could post a comment, and anyone continuing that story would reply to that comments, and so on.

So ... why not? I think the only rules (so far) need to be:

1) Reply to the comment whose story you're continuing, so readers can read a story easily without searching around too much (I know, if it branches, it branches).

2) You can write as little or as much as you want, make it fanfic or original fic, silly or serious, contemporary, historic, fantasy, SF, prose, comic, poetry, whatever. Just to see what directions it can go. If it's teh_pr0n or graphic violence, warn and hide it with span tags so people can read at work or skip it if they're not into it, or whatever. (<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #000000;">your text goes here</span>)

3) ETA2: A question brought up here asks about claiming characters: yes or no? I rule no, just because it takes longer for the story to be written if you have to wait for the next person. So feel free to write any character anyone comes up with. If the person who created it doesn't like the way you're taking it, they are free to write their own responses - it's OK to have more than one branch to the story (I think seeing the different ways the story could go is interesting :D).

i.e.: John Doe writes segment A. Jane Doe writes segment B, branching from A. John doesn't like Jane's direction, so writes his own segment B. Richard Roe comes through, likes both of them, and writes two different segment Cs, one for each segment B. And so on.

Feel free to ask for clarifications, etc. in the comments.

This might turn out good, or might fall flat. We'll see. :D

That being said, let me start with something reasonably generic and vague that can go in a number of directions...

(ETA1: 3 responses at the moment, and I'm loving the different ways it's gone already. XD)

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There was, of course, a library, a proper library, with shelves packed tight with leather-bound books carefully lined up at the edge of the shelf. There was, of course, someone walking through the aisles, echo of footsteps muffled by the paper and leather, searching for the right book. The figure stopped, bent to examine one of the lower shelves, then pulled out a book and opened it, flipping hastily through the pages, then stopped at a page a little more than halfway through the book.

"Aha. This is it."

1

[identity profile] naturalfractual.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 05:42 pm (UTC)(link)
The book was carefully set on the floor between the tightly filled stacks open to the desired location.

He stepped carefully on the page, the toe of his shoe touched the drawing displayed on the page.

There was the popping sound of displaced air and he disappeared.

The book closed itself with a snap of finality.

2

[identity profile] the-z.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
In a wash of colors, the world began to reform around him. Blots of blue joined with white to create puffy clouds in a sunny sky. Green melded with browns, purples and yellows until a field at the edge of a sparse wood solidified before him. Finally, a pool of deep red separated from the surroundings and flowed, twisted, and shook itself out to present a long-limbed, young woman with a somber expression.

Re: 2

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
"You'll have to fix this if you really want to live." she said in a quiet voice, the sort that circled in stereo and he never saw her lips move.

"I know it looks okay, but..it really isn't."

2

[identity profile] naturalfractual.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
He stood at that, dusting himself off, and bowed, his gaze drawn to the curl of red hair weaving itself across a pale shoulder.

“Madam, I am here to assist. But this hardly seems broken.”

Her red lips curved slightly at that, not quite a smile, not quite a sneer.

“Perhaps not, but broken it is. Every time one of you appears here, something is trampled and twisted. Such incursions must cease.”

Re: 2

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
"Please don't tell me that means you're going to hurt me..." The man frowned, still fixing the hemline of his jacket. He tried to keep his eyes off of her, something about her so beautiful and so gut-shaking scary.

"I did just say you would have to fix it if you wanted to live..."

"True...So, what? What should I do?"
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Maybe we should have come up with a coherent multi-threaded numbering scheme first

[personal profile] weirdquark 2007-11-20 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
The hand she reached out to put on his shoulder trembled. "Do you have it?"

...probably!

[identity profile] mechamel.livejournal.com 2007-11-21 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
As the woman's hand made contact, a jolt shifted the colors momentarily back into a blurred mass before refocusing.

"...the Hell?! What've I told you people about touching while I'm still syncing? Oughta just take this off to someone who can actually do what they're told," the man grumbled as he slipped a small package from the pockets of his weathered overcoat. With an impatient harrumph, he flipped the package upright for the other to see.

"Well?"
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2 b

[personal profile] weirdquark 2007-11-20 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
There was, of course, a librarian, passing by that particular aisle as she looked for a book a patron had requested. She clicked her tongue disapprovingly when she saw the book on the floor, and stopped to pick it up and put it back on the shelf. Then she noticed the title. All else was forgotten and she rushed to find her supervisor.

"Meredeth," she said, "we have a problem."

3b

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
"What do you mean a problem?" Meredeth looked up from her bits of paperwork and paperclip riddled desk. Eyes over halfmoon glasses.

But when the other librarian girl, Annalee, held up the book, Meredeth nearly fell from her chair.

"What is that still doing here?" Didn't we get rid of that?"
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Re: 4b

[personal profile] weirdquark 2007-11-20 06:23 pm (UTC)(link)
"Preservation insisted on moving it to the restricted section so we could keep it," Annalee said, putting the book down on Meredeth's desk and tugging at her sleeves. "That's not the problem. It was out. And it smells like it was used recently."

5b

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
As if to prove her point, the book snapped its cover at them weakly, seeking another passenger-- involuntary or not.

Meredeth clucked her tongue. "I told them we needed chains."
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Re: 6b

[personal profile] chomiji 2007-11-20 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)


Annalee looked seriously worried. "But there wasn't any in the budget to cover the silver chains! You know the brass ones don't last. Wasn't Daniel going to take care of it ... somehow? He said something about special shelf cards."

Re: 7b

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Meredeth snapped her fingers. "Right! The virgin parchment." She frowned, fishing her handheld out of its pocket. Moments later, the small globe lit to display Daniel's fuzzy golden face.

The kinkajou in Meredeth's handheld display sighed in miniature. "Central said they were out of virgins and we'd have to wait. Yes, I know. Look, just don't start with me, I've had a really bad day."

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
"How can there be a lack of virgins?!" Meredeth's eyebrows rose as she pursed her lips. "I can't believe this --"

"Mere, He's said he's having a bad day..." Annalee offered quietly. "Daniel?" She called out over her boss's shoulder, peeking up and waving. "Is there something else we can do? Something not with virgins? This book is...well, it's doing things again and we really can't have that going on..."

9b

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Before Daniel could answer, the book lunged off the table and bit Meredeth. Annalee watched her boss fade out of existence with a muffled shriek.

At least she still had a line to Daniel, their loyal reference kinkajou.
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Re: 9b

[personal profile] octopedingenue 2007-11-21 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
But first a run through the milliner's. Better faded than further unprepared.
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Re: 9b

[personal profile] chomiji 2007-11-21 03:46 am (UTC)(link)


Daniel cringed, the fur along his snout ruffling with disgust. "Annalee, you know I hate those places. They have ... feathers. And the chic. And fashionistas. Can't you try calling me back later? I need a nap like you wouldn't believe. And then maybe some grapes."


7b - 2

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
"Do you think he ever listens?"

Meredeth shook her head, scrunching her nose up at the book.

"Perhaps you should call him, I think he's down by the food court picking up lunch. We all know he rather pay attention to turkey sandwhiches than his job."

6b

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
"Yes but, what will we do?" Annalee sighed, eyeing the book. "This is a serious problem."

She paused, pushing aside a few strands of brown hair that caught on the frays of her lips.

"I mean, there's someone we can call, right?"

7c

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Meredeth snapped her fingers. "Right! This is definitely a matter for the helpdesk." She frowned, fishing her handheld out of its pocket.

Moments later, the small globe lit to display a remarkably bored young man. He straightened when he saw who was calling, though. "'Deth! What can I do for ya?"

Re: 7c

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
"James, there's a problem..." Meredeth kept herself from blushing at his comments, the young boy's sleepy eyes always getting to her.

Even if she was nearly ten years older than him.

"It's the book. It's done something again. You know, ancient magic, spells, disappearing people. I can't have the newscasters back in here you know. Something has to be done!"

8c

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
"Yeah, yeah. I'm on it." The globe made clackety sounds. "In the meantime, 'Deth... I've got tickets to Iron Maiden, baby. Come with me Friday, don't say maybe." James paused expectantly.

Re: 8c

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Meredeth blushed.

"James, I..." She looked up at Annalee who was watching with a half disgusted face. She shook the book, as a clue that was the most important part of the entire conversation.

Not watching her coworker fall for a boy who was only nearly twenty.

Meredeth turned in her chair and faced away from Annalee, who groaned.

"I hate metal...but, but..."

Annalee gagged.

"Of course James!"

10c

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
James giggled. "'Deth, you're so cute to play along. I shoulda known you'd like metal, with a name like Merry-Death. If I went for girls-- excuse me, fine older ladies-- you'd be first on my list, honest babe. But anyway, I gotcher answer: that book's flagged in the system. Anybody sees it, boss says come to Left of Central right away. Looks like they didn't even know it was in your branch, Dethmeister."

Re: 10c

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Meredeth stuck her tongue out at him and looked up at Annalee.

"There's your answer." There was a sparkle of something devious in her eyes. The honey tinted with gold.

"Do you think you can take over to Central, it's not that far? Maybe a 40 minute car ride, but.." She scrunched her mouth up.

"You know the fees for asking James for help, right?"

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Re: 10c

[personal profile] octopedingenue 2007-11-21 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
Annalee became very interested in cleaning under her nails with a date card. "I hardly ever get out of this dimension these days, anyway. What's the loss of a few alterna-mes going to hurt?"

Re: 10c

[identity profile] frostedelves.livejournal.com 2007-11-26 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Meredeth shrugged. "I've nearly run out, and I feel fine. They're having such a hard time tracking the rest down that Jamesie threatened to take my nearest subordinate's instead, if I called in again this mon-- er." She let out a cute little half-covered laugh. Her subordinate was well familiar with it.

It had not improved with long acquaintance.

"I'm sure he was just kidding, Annalee. Run along, won't you?"
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[identity profile] batwrangler.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Let's just hope no one gets kidnapped or stalked over this. XD

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
We'll just have to see. :)
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Out of story comment

[personal profile] weirdquark 2007-11-20 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Can we have a rule/ruling on claiming characters? On the one hand, it makes it easier not to step on people's toes with simultaneous posts that contradict each other, but on the other hand, if people claim characters, everyone else has to wait for them to respond.

(Personally, I have no preference, but it would be good to decide so people can go ahead and post with characters other people created, or know they should wait, depending.)

Re: Out of story comment

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm actually OK with contradicting, because that just means the story branches and people can continue writing both ways and see how both potential stories evolve.

And I say no on claiming characters, just because that makes it harder and longer, as you say. That works if you've got a limited number of people who all commit to doing a story, but not so much if there's a wide variety of participants who may or may not post at their whim. :) (I'll edit the post.)

Re: Out of story comment

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
yuh claiming chars makes me feel like we're in a role play. hahah. randomly picking up the story and randomly taking it in strange directions from any random part is def the fun.

OH YOU'VE GIVEN ME SOMETHING TO DO ALL DAY. SO UNFAIR.

Re: Out of story comment

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
:D Yupyup! And if you have two ideas, you don't have to pick one: you can throw down with both. :D

If nobody posts following [livejournal.com profile] the_z's twist, I may have to see what I can come up with.

Re: Out of story comment

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
hahah I SAW IT THERE ALL LONLEY AND I HAD TO HELP IT OUT :D
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Re: Out of story comment

[personal profile] chomiji 2007-11-20 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)


And ... we just had our first head-on collision!



(Why am I not surprised that I was involved ... .)

Re: Out of story comment

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
XD Yay for simulposting!

We'll just have to see what happens. :D

(edited for appropriate icon)

Re: Out of story comment

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)
THE 7:00 HOUR HAS COME!

[identity profile] tokyoghoststory.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
On the page there was written type, list form.

"This is exactly what I was looking for."

and at the top was written: "Clam Chowder of Eternal Suprise"

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Penelope looked up and down the aisle before quietly tearing the page out of the book. She re-shelved the book, taking care to make sure it matched up perfectly with the other books on the shelf, so no one could tell at a glance that it had been removed. She folded the page into quarters, then tucked it securely into a pocket in her black combat fatigues, zipped it shut, then touched the earpiece of her headset and whispered, "Stage 3 complete. Over."

She listened to the instructions given her, whispered acknowledgment, and silently made her way back to her entry point.
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[personal profile] octopedingenue 2007-11-21 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
In Ninth Dewey Decimal Point of Hell reserved for the worst offenders of book molestation, a cerberus stirred in its sleep.