telophase: (Sanzo - wide load)
telophase ([personal profile] telophase) wrote2006-07-04 12:33 am
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Another ink practice...

I thought long and hard about what to do. More scenery? Difficult flowing clothing? Elegant and delicate character design?




Oh shut up. You'd have done the same, too.

Original: Mine:



At any rate, I was working off a *very* blown up, *very* fuzzy copy, so a lot of what I was doing with the shadows, bruises and assorted contusions was guesswork. Not too shabby, although I overdid it in some bits and underdid it in others. Ah well.
naxto: (sutra and gun blazing)

[personal profile] naxto 2006-07-04 06:15 am (UTC)(link)
GUH....that looks awesome.

[identity profile] heyoka.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 06:39 am (UTC)(link)
SANZO!BOOTY!
scribblemoose: image of moose with pen and paper (oh my)

[personal profile] scribblemoose 2006-07-04 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
*gigglesnort*

I'm not an artist but wow. Looks pretty damn good to me. (The inking, that is. Sanzo's backside *always* looks good. ^___^)
oyceter: teruterubouzu default icon (Default)

[personal profile] oyceter 2006-07-04 07:42 am (UTC)(link)
Total perv remark: I must say, in your version, Sanzo's butt isn't clenched as much.

(Yes, Rachel is making me post this)

[identity profile] homasse.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 09:14 am (UTC)(link)
...hey, you're right! It's not!

[identity profile] flyingpeachbun.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 09:20 am (UTC)(link)
Nice work! Yours is a lot cleaner looking..it's a different feeling, but I think the different toning changes it too XD Omg can't keep from staring at his ass!

[identity profile] rayechu.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 04:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I actually like your less dotty version much better.

[identity profile] tirwen.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
So, what is this from exactly... and where can I find it? ;)

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
It's from the Burial arc in Saiyuki Reload. :D I've forgotten exactly which volume, 2 or 3, when we're going into Sanzo's backstory when he was wandering around and looking for Koumyo' killer. This panel is when some monks look in on him and are shocked at his scars and how violent a life he seems to have led.

[identity profile] herchuckness.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 09:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Fufu, lovely job. I'd have been terribly distracted, trying to do that panel. XD

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2006-07-04 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Mna, it was a tough job, but someone had to do it.

[identity profile] bluesira.livejournal.com 2006-07-07 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
You jest about what you chose to practice your inking with, but I can see that this is an extraordinarily difficult panel to do.
Trying to convey the motion of water as well as the tensing of muscles and the bone structure showing through the flesh.
My God.
Wonderful job. In some ways, yours is better than the original.
(I especially like the lines for the very top of where the water is splashing up inside the bucket. Very minor point, I know, but I noticed it.)

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2006-07-07 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! XD

[identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com 2006-07-07 04:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Hell yes, I would have.

[identity profile] telophase.livejournal.com 2006-07-07 04:40 pm (UTC)(link)
The Sanzo ass trumps all.