I'm wondering what her schedule is, and how many pages a week she's doing. The art is inconsistent, simplistic, stiff. The writing is ... crap. The whole thing reads like she's trying to do too much in one week, and the art and writing is suffering for it.

I haven't run across her earlier art, so I have no idea what it looks like. I'd have pegged the mangaka of this one as a beginner.